Paris

Selfie writing - A trip to Paris

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Finally me and my family got to go to the astounding Paris for 3 long weeks. Everything was amazing like the pastries, sights and the view we had from our room was awesome! We also got to see the ridiculously high Eiffel Tower. The township was buzzing with different noises as we made our way all over town exploring and   I took heaps of selfies.This is my favourite the tower is so cool.

By Isabel

Pizza Day

Pizza Day

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YAY! Today is pizza day,my family and I are getting pizza for dinner. Later we were at the pizza store and we ordered our pizza. What seemed like one hour later the waiter brought our food in.The pizza absolutely reeked. I was thinking I just couldn't eat something so disgusting because it looked like someone chewed it threw up, then put it on a plate.I asked what it was

and the waiter said it was a goat cheese and sheep gut pizza, so  I told the man that they got the order wrong then they  got us our order.

By Isabel

The deadly forest

The deadly forest

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I went to the forest to explore but it was horrible!

I lost my food when a tree collapsed on my backpack so then I found an orange on the ground but it looked rotten . Within the forest in the darkness was a crocodile growling at me. I ran through the forests wide exit and ran all of the way home. When I got home I was telling my mum what happened and she started laughing.She then told me that I did not read the sign which said DO NOT GO IN THE DEADLY FOREST! Whoops!

By Isabel