Selfie writing - A trip to Paris
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Finally me and my family got to go to the astounding Paris for 3 long weeks. Everything was amazing like the pastries, sights and the view we had from our room was awesome! We also got to see the ridiculously high Eiffel Tower. The township was buzzing with different noises as we made our way all over town exploring and I took heaps of selfies.This is my favourite the tower is so cool.
By Isabel
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