The deadly forest
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I went to the forest to explore but it was horrible!
I lost my food when a tree collapsed on my backpack so then I found an orange on the ground but it looked rotten . Within the forest in the darkness was a crocodile growling at me. I ran through the forests wide exit and ran all of the way home. When I got home I was telling my mum what happened and she started laughing.She then told me that I did not read the sign which said DO NOT GO IN THE DEADLY FOREST! Whoops!
By Isabel
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